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OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 05:53 AM
I know this is probulbly alot to ask but I'm trying to writing a FanFic for Versus XIII and I need someone to describe in really good detail of the Versus guys clothing. can anyone help please?

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 06:14 AM
Just as long as it's said in fancy words.
*moved*

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 06:24 AM
alright so can you help with my little problem Naunen

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 06:27 AM
alright so can you help with my little problem Naunen

----Yeah. Gimme some time though. It's been a while since I wrote prose. So just the Prince?

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 06:31 AM
----Yeah. Gimme some time though. It's been a while since I wrote prose. So just the Prince?

Yeah just the Prince and I was also thiniking about Lightning too so if its alright with you can you describe her to please.

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 06:33 AM
Yeah just the Prince and I was also thiniking about Lightning too so if its alright with you can you describe her to please.

----I think I'll describe the Prince instead. So, any point of views it's gonna be in? 'cause I did write interesting prose. Like, I mean interesting. o.o;

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 06:36 AM
----I think I'll describe the Prince instead. So, any point of views it's gonna be in? 'cause I did write interesting prose. Like, I mean interesting. o.o;

its going to be in a third person point of view

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 06:39 AM
its going to be in a third person point of view

----Ahh, that helps. It's gonna be a while 'fore I'm satisfied with my description so if you're rushing, sorry. :|

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 06:40 AM
----Ahh, that helps. It's gonna be a while 'fore I'm satisfied with my description so if you're rushing, sorry. :|

naw its kool just take your time Naunen and thanks alot.

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 07:36 AM
A young man clad entirely in black; the somewhat long leather jacket tailored not too loosely to his build with flame-like designs embracing his shoulders, the billowy sleeves of the jacket ending just past his biceps, the collar standing up to his mouth; his loose-fitting pants were worn with the hems pushed up by his boots, appearing baggy; his leather shin-length boots fit snugly around his ankles and appeared plain while the laces were tied around the boots starting with the second row of grommets and weaving through the other grommets. He wore leather gloves that loosely cover less than half his forearms, fastening around the wrists to the back of them with a strap and buckle.

Not as detailed but yeah. x_X I can't write so well with an unbiased third-person view. Perhaps other people can add more to what I wrote. x_X I suck at writing so yes, don't remind me anymore of that.

When you finish a chapter or something, lemme read it! =D

Patsie
Mar 11 2008, 08:53 AM
That description is mad, i can use it for my cookie stealing panels of Lightning and Vman :aldo:

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 10:08 AM
Believe me. It could've been more interesting. D;

Patsie
Mar 11 2008, 10:14 AM
stfu, it's better than what i could do :aldo:

Whiplash
Mar 11 2008, 10:31 AM
You're writing a fanfic and you want someone else to do your descriptions for you?

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 10:34 AM
He's asking for help actually. Probably a taste of how others will do it.

Fenristh
Mar 11 2008, 01:10 PM
You're writing a fanfic and you want someone else to do your descriptions for you?
I thought that as well. He is obviously going to copy and paste what you said, Nau. rofl. Shouldn't you do your own work?

Amleya
Mar 11 2008, 01:19 PM
I WANNA ILLUSTRATE D:

Naunen
Mar 11 2008, 01:28 PM
I thought that as well. He is obviously going to copy and paste what you said, Nau. rofl. Shouldn't you do your own work?

----Damn, I forgot. I shoulda somehow stamped it. D; Oh well. I usually write from an INTERESTING point of view anyway. I GOTZ PROOF I WROTE THAT! *full description on NotePad*
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OmiVersusXIV
Mar 11 2008, 03:29 PM
naw everyone im notgoing to copy the exact same thing im going to write it in my own words ijust neeeded help because i cant descrbe stuff that good im only good with dialounge and thanks for the description Naunen

Fantasygurl1227
Mar 27 2008, 09:35 PM
I wanna read the fanfic when your done! If thats okay anyway :)

OmiVersusXIV
Mar 27 2008, 09:50 PM
I wanna read the fanfic when your done! If thats okay anyway :)

of course i will post it on the forum on saturday for sure but i havent had that much time to work on it because ive been busy with work and school but i will have it for sure on ssaturday or sunday.

Naunen
Mar 27 2008, 11:02 PM
I can be a beta reader. :D