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[elephant_lost]

This is a summary of my story that I made into a poem...to make it unique...it's not my life story it's a fictional story I started working on for some years now...and now I'm getting back into it...I havent written like this for years...so....enjoy?
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(Summary)

...We are as one...
....In which we fight and have faught...
...Taking our sins into thought...
...Wanting that forgiveness...
...That we seek or have saught...
...You bring yourself down...
...Frown to smile, smile to frown...
...No one wins in war...
...What do we fight for...
...We will lose in the end...
...Are you my friend...
...Are you my enemy...
...You are my godsend...
...You are my end...
...Save yourself...
...For I cannot say myself...
...Shine down on my fate...
...Shadow your hate...
...Destroy what you create...
...It is our natural state...

When our paths intertwine; it will be ever so divine

[Élan]

I like it! Are these actual lines from the story, or is it poetry inspired by it? Either way, it sounds interesting!:)

[elephant_lost]

Thank you <33

But they arent lines it's from my story, it's the inspiration and the summary in a way...I thought I'd give a shot at using a poem as the summary....My story still doesnt have a title yet
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[Hae Jung Shin]

very nice miss Elphy <3 you sing like thom yorke and you can write too ;D

[elephant_lost]

heh ^^;

Thank you miss llone <33

[Misschoco]

Seems like an introspective poem to me-The types of poems that I favor.Overall I loved it.

[elephant_lost]

Why thank you <333

And I never thought to categorize it under that...especially seeing as my story is very much like that in it's dramatic sense...